The ocean's bank Is a place I would love to be To run away from the dog's bark And things they force me to be I try ...
The ocean's bank
Is a place I would love to be
To run away from the dog's bark
And things they force me to be
I try to be the best
To make them proud
But as you know, we all need rest
From those things that are loud
What should I do then?
Which steps should I take?
To break free from the lion's den
To take the steps I make
I want to be a free bird
Without my wings being clipped
To speak my own word
Without having to follow a script
How can I soar high
Without the fear of the ground?
To make things right
Using my own sound
How can I turn things around?
Without having to lose them?
Without them bringing me down
So I can be a rare gem
I wish I can now right the wrong
I wish I can now say my thoughts
So we can keep plugging along
To not keep me distraught
But now it seems too late
To make things right
Closed is the gate
That was meant to make things bright
Minatuuu, like I said earlier. This is good and I like it🤗🤗. I love the way it rhymes also. Don't stop writing babe!!
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ReplyDeleteIt's great babe, you're a gifted bard. I Shall keep looking forward to seeing more of you. I love you!!!
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Up top baby girl ....keep your head up
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Nice write up it sounds so perfect
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ReplyDeleteCould use a little edit...like that part about gem ....u said rear gem instead of rare gem....aside that ...the write up is also ,the rhyme is great too ...I love it .. awesome 😍
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ReplyDeleteI want to be a free bird, without my wings being clipped. To speak my own words,without having to follow a script. Masterpiece 🥰😍
ReplyDeleteI love it especially the part that says"I want to be a free bird". Weldone dear 😍😘
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